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Stan Lee and Jack Kirby: who did what?

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Answer: they each created the whole thing. On their own. It depends on how you define the question.


Stan Lee created Marvel Comics, with a big M and big C: the corporation as we know it. Jack Kirby created Marvel comics with a small c: the individual stories. 

Stan Lee was just as creative as Kirby, but in a different way. This is what Stan Lee created:

  1. The Marvel Universe itself:
    Stan created the links. Jack Kirby made stand alone series: Stan linked them together. Stan also created the footnotes, encouraging people to buy back issues. This created the back issue industry, which allowed the comics industry to ride out the bad times and increased the profile and earning power of the best talent.
  2. Easy to read dialog.
    Stan wrote the finished dialog on Jack's comics, adapting (or ignoring) Jack's notes. People accuse Stan's dialog of stating the obvious, and his plots of being formulaic (e.g. the male hero always rescues the weak female). But by golly, you always know where you are with a Stan Lee story. You're guaranteed to understand it and (probably) have a pleasant read.
  3. Emotional touches
    such as the noble deaths: Stan knows what sells and what connects with readers.
  4. Reader suggestions
    Stan changed stories in response to what readers seemed to want: Stan connected with readers like nobody before or since.
  5. More comics:
    by creating a successful comic company. Stan Lee gave us more comics and put more writers and artists in print. Stan is also probably the best comics editor in history (according to "Stan Lee and The Rise and Fall of the American Comic Book"). No other comics publisher, and certainly no other Marvel Editor In Chief has achieved so much.
  6. Creative freedom:
    he let his artists add far more to the story, bringing out their best (at least before merchandising became profitable and forced the stories to stop changing).
  7. Returning characters
    While Jack Kirby liked to create new stories, Lee liked to bring back anybody who was popular: the Sub-Mariner, Dr Doom, etc: they would be gone and forgotten if not for Stan.
  8. The "who did what" box
    Comics had been signed by artists and writers for years, but most readers didn't notice. But Stan put a big standardized box on every splash page, so EVERYBODY noticed. This enabled the best writers and artists to get a higher profile and do more work, It also revealed the inkers and letterers and colorists for the first time. Without Stan, many artists would still be largely unknown and penniless.
  9. A market for older comics:
    By conquering the media and being so likable, Stan made comics respectable. Remember that in the 1950s comics were treated as either harmful or kids' stuff. He changed this.
  10. Longer comic runs.
    Stan increased reader loyalty.  The Hucksterism, brand loyalty, freedom to artists and relaxed letters pages were not new: they came from EC comics and their "usual gang of idiots." The unique innovation was to link it into one big story, the Marvel Universe. Thanks to Stan's invention, comics that would be expected to last maybe fifty issues at most are still going after five hundred!

Stan's position is not in doubt. He deserves his millions of dollars, his fame and his endless fans. Stan does not need defending: his achievements speak for themselves. I want to start with that., and drive home the point with a sledge hammer., Because otherwise what follows might get ugly. I am going to argue that Jack Kirby wrote the actual comics, and Stan simply dumbed them down to reach a wider audience. Them's fighting words! But read the evidence and judge for yourself.

But let's be clear: while Jack Kirby created Marvel "comics" (small "c", the pictures and stories) it was Stan Lee who created Marvel "Comics": the business empire, and the shared universe. Anybody who has ever run a business, or followed the lives of great entrepreneurs, knows that this is just as creative, just as difficult, as writing and drawing great stories.

Let's get on with the topic: exactly who did what? What does the evidence show?

The controversy

The early Fantastic Four said "written by Stan Lee, drawn by Jack Kirby." Nice and simple. In "Origins of Marvel Comics" and other interviews, Stan Lee indicates that he came up with the ideas and Jack Kirby drew them. But there are several big problems here:

Jack Kirby was only paid as an artist, but he felt he should be paid more because he also contributed story ideas. He believed he had been promised payment and it never came, so he finally left Marvel. Years later, in the 1980s, Jack was fighting to get his original art back from Marvel, and the two sides became polarized. Some fans felt that clearly Stan did everything. Others felt that he had taken credit for Kirby's work. Still others felt that their contribution was equal. The battle rages to this day. So who is right?

The case against Stan Lee

Some people argue that Jack Kirby created everything. These quotes were assembled by Patrick Ford (see the comments section in the link):

Stan Goldberg:
” Stan would drive me home and we’d plot our stories in the car. I’d say to Stan,”How’s this? Millie loses her job.” He’d say,”Great! Give me 25 pages.” And that took him off the hook. One time I was in Stan’s office and I told him, “I don’t have another plot.” Stan got out of his chair and walked over to me, looked me in the face, and said very seriously, “I don’t ever want to hear you say you can’t think of another plot.” Then he walked back and sat down in his chair. He didn’t think he needed to tell me anything more.”
[interviewer: ” Sounds like you were doing most of the writing then.”]
“Well, I was.”One time I was in Stan’s office and I told him, “I don’t have another plot.” Stan got out of his chair and walked over to me, looked me in the face, and said very seriously, “I don’t ever want to hear you say you can’t think of another plot.” Then he walked back and sat down in his chair. He didn’t think he needed to tell me anything more.”

For contrast, Goldberg said this about Kirby:
“Jack would sit there at lunch, and tell us these great ideas about what he was going to do next. It was like the ideas were bursting from every pore of his body. It was very interesting because he was a fountain of ideas. One day Jack came in and had this 20-page story and proceeded to tell us he was having his house and studio painted. I asked, “Where did you draw the story?” Jack said,”I put my board on the stair banister, and drew it.”

Steve Ditko (letter to Comic Book Marketplace magazine published in issue #63)

"The fact is we had no story or idea discussion about Spider-Man books even before issue #26 up to when I left the book. Stan never knew what was in my plotted stories until I took in the penciled story, the cover, my script and Sol Brodsky took the material from me and took it all into Stan’s office, so I had to leave without seeing or talking to Stan."

The legendary artist Wally Wood goes even further:

Did I say Stanley had no smarts? Well, he DID come up with two sure fire ideas… the first one was “Why not let the artists WRITE the stories as well as draw them?”… And the second was … ALWAYS SIGN YOUR NAME ON TOP …BIG”. And the rest is history … Stanley, of course became rich and famous … over the bodies of people like Bill [Everett] and Jack [Kirby]. Bill, who had created the character that had made his father rich wound up COLORING and doing odd jobs.

Gil Kane's opinion of Stan Lee is apparently similar.

"On each page, from 1964 – 1970 next to every single panel Jack wrote extensive margin notes explaining to Lee what was taking place in the story. It took Jack about 2 weeks do do a single story, it may have taken Lee as little as 4 hours to add text to Jack’s art." (source)

The case against Jack Kirby

The debate over "who did what" often relies on the following myths. I have been guilty of them myself, often on these very pages. These pages are a work in progress, some pages were written years ago, before I really began to discover Jack Kirby's writing.  You will see these claims again and again, here and elsewhere, and none of them stand up to scrutiny.

"Stan said..."  "Jack said..."

Articles about Stan and Jack often quote what they said years later. But memories are simply not reliable. When we remember something our brains re-write the past. Study after study has shown that memories simply cannot be trusted. Instead we should rely on documents from the time.

Stan made Jack famous?

If Stan plucked Jack from obscurity then Jack should be grateful! But Jack Kirby was already famous: far more famous than Stan Lee. "Simon and Kirby" was the most famous double act in comics, probably even beating Siegel and Shuster. The names "Simon and Kirby" even appeared on covers, because their names sold comics.


Jack wrote stilted dialog?

For my money, Jack Kirby writes the best dialog in the business. But not everyone feels that way.

"Overblown as Lee's dialogue could be - “Stand back, human! None may leave this building by imperial order of Prince Namor himself!” - it had a certain corny charm. Kirby's characters spoke in a stilted, awkward dialect which was sometimes very hard to read. In that debut issue of his Jimmy Olsen series, for example, he has Morgan Edge declare: “No deal, no how, Kent! Not you, Buddy Boy! The 'hairies' who inhabit the wild area - trust nobody over twenty-five!” (source)

By this definition Shakespeare also writes stilted dialog:

"Friends, Romans, countrymen, lend me your ears; I come to bury Caesar, not to praise him. The evil that men do lives after them; The good is oft interred with their bones"

See how Shakespeare's ideas jump around and use weird language. But maybe that's becaue he's so old? Then how about this:

"O, Great Northern Mall, you dwindling oracle of upstate New York, your colossal lot of frost-heaved spaces so vacant I could cut straight through while blinking and keep my eyes shut,"

The National Poetry society awarded that first prize in 2015.. Poetry is like that. You have to read it slow, savour its words. So let's take another look at Kirby's "stilted dialog" example:

“No deal, no how, Kent!"

How is that hard to understand? Here is conflict, the heart of good writing! And this is a sentence a real person might say (the speaker is an older New Yorker in 1970)

"Not you, Buddy Boy!"

And now we have personality and teasing. Something that the Stan Lee Namor example lacks. And notice the implication that the speaker and the listener are social equals. This makes the conflict meaningful: the speaker could actually lose. But in the Namor example, the power is so one sided that there is no tension.

"The 'hairies' who inhabit the wild area"

A short sentence fragment, but packed with poetic imagery and useful information. "Haries" brings with it Hippie connotations, with political and social meaning. It also tells us that the older group look down on the younger, finding them crude and uncivilized. And yet they have hair, they are full of youth and vigour.

"- trust nobody over twenty-five!”

This is the key dialog. This is what I wanted to get to. It brings us to the next topic, feet of clay:

Stan added the feet of clay?

"One of Marvel's most striking innovations had been to give its heroes commonplace problems in their civilian lives, and a degree of ambiguity about whether their powers were a blessing or a curse. Spider-Man was always short of money, for example, and The Thing gained his phenomenal strength only at the cost of his new, hideous appearance."  [I have deleted Stan's quote where he takes credit]  "This approach played a big part in Marvel's early success, Lee's the only common factor in all the debut books using it, and its not something you find in either Kirby or Ditko's solo work. For all those reasons, it's fair to credit Lee as its inventor" (source)

We only have to open any Kirby story at random to refute that. Let's look again at the previous "stilted language" for example:

“No deal, no how, Kent! Not you, Buddy Boy! The 'hairies' who inhabit the wild area - trust nobody over twenty-five!”

Think of what that means. The speaker is older but cannot trust the young. So? Despite being older, larger, more experienced man, and having the authority and power of the state to back him up, he cannot deal with the youth. He has no power, despite his power! This is real weakness, real feet of clay. The guy is weak despite being strong. This is how feet of clay work in the real world.This is true for all Kirby creations: their weaknesses are serious and real. Kirby's Captain America has only the strength of a human athlete, no more. Kirby's Orion must fight against his own father. More importantly, Kirby created more than just superheroes. For example, Kirby and Simon literally invented the whole romance genre. An entire genre based on stories of human weakness.

feet of clay

Stan made the comics smarter?

"The comic book marketplace was changing thanks, in no small part, to the efforts of Stan Lee. Pretty soon, the old way of creating comics was not going to work. Audiences were becoming smarter, not necessarily good news for the comics industry. Perhaps Stan actually recognized that or perhaps his different approach to how characters were written was just a lucky coincidence. Either way, it lead to an elevation in the average age of Marvel Comics readers and ultimately, to the average age of all comic readers." (source)

None of Stan Lee's comics were as adult in their themes and approach as Kirby's adult oriented comics. I don't mean juvenile interests like sex and violence, I mean real adult themes, like marriage (the romance comics), psychology (Strange World of Your Dreams), or Kirby's own direct experience of fighting in World War II. Some of Kirby's earliest work was adapting classic novels: superhero and monster comics were just a small part of his repertoire.

adult themes

This is hardly surprising, as Kirby had seen the real world. he fought in the war, he set up his own businesses (e.g. with Joe Simon), he worked for different people. He spent most of his time working at home surrounded by books, listening to the news on the radio. He created collages from the science magazines he read. Here for example is Jack at work with Joe Simon: note the books always at hand:


And here he is after he left Marvel, circa 1972. Again notice the books on the shelves.

more books

Or listen to his interviews: he is always wondering, always thinking about big questions of life, the universe and everything. This man is a thinker who was always coming up with original concepts.

Stan added the emotion?

"Stan brought something to the table that didn't appear in the mags of other publishers at that time - emotions." (source)

Kirby, with Joe Simon, created the romance genre. Kirby wrote war stories from experience, where friends lie dead and dying. So Kirby could not communicate emotion? Hmmm.

For an example of intense emotion in Kirbys solo works, see the discussion of Captain Victory.

Kirby was behind the times?

There are numerous other criticisms, but they are generally opinion, and are based on a particular reading of the facts. For example:

"Jack simply not understanding that the audience for comics had moved on since the 1940s and 1950s and a Big Idea was no longer enough" (source)

I have the opposite opinion: I think Kirby was too far ahead of his time. Kirby's creations now earn billions at the box office, but Kirby didn't live to see any of that money.  And I don't just mean creations where Stan Lee was also involved. DC movies contain a lot of Kirby's ideas too, from the time after he left Marvel. At time of writing (July 2016) it looks like the upcoming Justice League movie will rely heavily on New Gods ideas (Darkseid, boom tubes, Apoklolips, etc.). And many commentators have suggested that George Lucas drew on Kirby's ideas for Star Wars. Here I will look at just one example: how George Lucas created Darth Vader.

Kirby's influence on Darth Vader
Star Wars drew on many sources. Old movies are an obvious influence: Saturday morning Flash Gordon serials, WWII dog fights, etc. But Lucas openly admits to getting ideas from comics (such as the "Classics Illustrated" version of "War of the Worlds": see Star Wars Insider 41, p.26). George Lucas was reading a lot of comics when he planned Star Wars: he even part owned the "Supersnipe Comic Art Gallery", part of the famous Supernipe comic shop. Let's look at Darth Vader for example. Ralph McQuarry's original design was a cross between a Samurai and a Nazi:

early Vader

Lucas's final version was changed, and was more like Dr Doom. He had Doom's hideously scarred face, Doom's mix of magic and science, and a father-son story plucked straight from Kirby's Darkseid and Orion. Darkseid of course is pronounced "dark side". The death star is like Apokolips with its fire pits, this Darth Vader scene in Empire is almost identical to an unforgettable FF scene from 1974 (based on an earlier Kirby scene), and so on.

Vader and Doom

Kirby even had a character called Skywalker in his "Justice Inc" comic (issue 2).


(By the way, note how Kirby routinely used the name "Avenger" before Stan Lee started using it: Turok was the first "Aveger" back in Simon and Kirby's Captain America 1)

This doesn't prove anything of course. But the similarities were obvious at the time. As Mark Hamill recalled:

MARK: It was at Bill Mumy's house in Laurel Canyon. I also went out to [Jack's] house once in Thousand Oaks. [Jack] was a very self-effacing guy. You'd never know from his demeanor how important he really was. We were joking, and I said that when I first saw Darth Vader, I thought, "Oh, it's Doctor Doom." (laughter) He certainly didn't say, "Oh, he took my ideas," or any of that kind of stuff. He was content with who he was and his abilities." (source)

Given Kirby's fame among comic readers in the early 1970s (when Lucas was planning Star Wars) it is difficult to argue that comic fan Lucas was not aware of Darkseid or Dr Doom. My point is not that Lucas stole from Kirby: all creative people "steal" ideas and develop them further. My point is that Kirby dealt with powerful, eternal concepts, and he did it first. Kirby was not behind the times. He was way out in front.

Controlling the message

Stan Lee is superb at self promotion. So his name is strongly linked to the characters he worked on. Take Captain America for example. Captain America was created by Joe Simon and Jack Kirby, yet "Many fans -- and even Lee himself, once -- have erroneously credited Lee with having created the character" (source, emphasis added)

The recent Captain America movie has Stan Lee in the credits, but there are no references to Simon and Kirby. The movie has a cameo role for Stan Lee, but not for anyone representing Simon or Kirby. In big letters the movie calls Cap "The First Avenger", referring to the characters closely associated with Stan Lee. The movie set features a shop called "Excelsior Cigars", a reference to Stan's catch phrase. Stan is often photographed with Captain America imagery, and signing Captain America comics. And so it goes on.

Captain America

So the casual fan is most likely to think that Stan Lee created the character:

"I have this really bad habit, though I do it out of love and pride for my grandfather. Whenever I see someone wearing a Captain America t-shirt, I like to first compliment them on their stellar choice, and then I ask, “Do you know who created Captain America?” Answers have varied. Some may say they don’t know, few say Simon and Kirby, and many say Stan Lee." - Megan Margulies, granddaughter of Joe Simon. (source)

This is not new. In 1984 the planned Captain America movie advertised Cap as "Stan Lee's Character". (source)

Captain America

In 1985 an advert in Variety magazine (the same ad?) said Stan Lee created the character.

"1985 March 6: A Cannon Films ad in Variety magazine erroneously credits Stan Lee as the creator of Captain America. The Kirbys’ attorney contacts Marvel Comics about the error." (source)

Thirty years later Marvel Studios still linked Stan Lee to the name Captain America, without mentioning Simon and Kirby. Prominent fans encouraged a movie boycott.

"Jack Kirby's co-creator credit appears nowhere in the promotion of 'The Avengers.' His fans have expressed outrage over the way his contributions to the movie's very existence are being swept under the rug. Stephen Bissette (co-creator of 'Constantine,' and noted 'Swamp Thing' artist) called for a boycott of Marvel comics and merchandise, while James Sturm, co-founder of the Center for Cartoon Studies, also published an essay explaining his decision to boycott the movie." (source)

Marvel was afraid to admit credit because the Kirby family wanted a share of the profits. But with so much money at stake Marvel finally offered the Kirbys an undisclosed sum to resolve the dispute.  So from 2015 Kirby's name will sometimes appears alongside Stan Lee's. But Stan Lee's name and likeness are far more prominent in general publicity. Kirby's supporters still have to be on guard for claims like this:

John Arcudi

"Stan Lee did not co-create "Captain America" as is stated in his biography on Comic Con International's website.  How can we get this fixed?" (

So while Stan does not actively say "I did it" his name is generally the one in the credits. Alan Moore put it bluntly:

"Alan Moore [...] was scathing about Lee, who he accused of falsely claiming responsibility for the creation of Captain America during his panel" (source)

But Stan Lee's dominance of the message is so complete that readers replied that Alan Moore was "full of BS" and "Stan-bashing"

"I don't think I have heard or read anywhere that Stan Lee ever said he created 'Captain America'. [...] I get a bit tired of the Stan-bashing."

"I love Alan Moore's work but dang... He is so full of BS opinions" (source)

Captain America is a clear cut case. Stan had nothing to do with the character's creation, yet he was the only one credited on screen.

"Secrets Behind the Comics"

Stan Lee's concept of creation was illustrated (literally!) back in 1947, in his book "Secrets Behind the Comics".


In the book, Stan states that the name on the book is not necessarily the person who actually wrote or drew it:


Stan then showed us who he thought was the real creator behind a strip. He used the example of, you guessed it, Captain America.

Captain America

It is clear that Stan Lee thought that publisher Martin Goodman was the genius, the only name that mattered. Stan did not even mention Joe Simon or Jack Kirby. Yet Simon and Kirby had already created the character before offering it to Goodman. As long time comic reader Kurt F. Mitchell explains:

"According to Joe Simon's 'My Life in Comics,' he and Jack had created the entire first issue of Captain America before Simon was hired to be Timely's first in-house editor. Had he not been hired just then, Cap might well have wound up at Centaur or Novelty Press and became THEIR million-copies-a-month cash cow instead of Goodman's."

There is no reason to doubt either man on this. Simon and Kirby ran their own comic publishing house and routinely produced new characters. They are among the most prolific comic inventors in history. Goodman in contrast was a magazine publisher, who cared little for comics: he was far more interested in the bigger and more lucrative men's magazine section. Goodman was famous for two things: ruthless business practices (which were the norm back then) and copying trends created by other people. To suggest that he worried about the comics or came up with original comic ideas is, shall we say, an interesting slant on history. Reader "Ish Kabbible" suggests why Simon and Kirby were not mentioned by name.

"By this time [1947]. both creators had long left Marvel and in fact might have already been in competition with Marvel as the publishers of Prize Comics. Of course Marvel would not jeopardize their claim over what those two had created for them in the past by giving them credit at this stage of the game. Martin Goodman was well aware of  what was going on at that time between DC and Jerry Siegel & Joe Shuster."

Siegel and Shuster are relevant to this story: in 1947 they had just been fired for trying to get the rights to the character they created. This was the year when Stan Lee published "Secrets Behind the Comics", which argues that the publisher of a comic (e.g. Martin Goodman) is the real creator of the characters. Comics historian Jamie Coville gives the background. Siegel and Shuster sold Superman to DC when they were both young. They were then both drafted into the war. When they came back they found that not only was DC making millions from their creation, but were also making millions from a derivative character, Superboy, without paying Siegel or Shuster an extra dime. So in 1946 they hired a lawyer.

"The two of them would also lose their jobs in 1947 because of this legal battle. [they finally settled oput of court ion 1948]. The two of them would briefly give comic strips another try with a Funnyman character. But it wasn't successful. Afterwards Joe Shuster would quit comics altogether.
Jerry Siegel and his family were broke, their economic status had gotten so bad that Siegels wife Joanne, visited Jack Liebowitz at DC and told them how bad things were. She asked him 'Do you really want to see in the newspaper-Creator of Superman Starves to Death?' Jack Liebowitz did not, so DC gave Siegel some writing assignments in 1958. At a price, Jerry would receive no credit or special privileges for his work. But sometime in 1964 Jerry made a comment about wanting to be treated better, and he was immediately fired for it." (source)

Stan Lee's view of creation was that the publisher hires the writers and therefore the publisher is the creative force. This seems a long stretch for Martin Goodman, who thought so little of comics that he hired his teenage cousin (Stan Lee: writer at 16, editor at 17) to run the entire line. But perhaps it was more true of Stan himself? After all, Stan was intimately involved with every stage of production. This leads us to "The Marvel Method", where an artist would write his own stories, after a discussion with Stan Lee, and Stan would then shape the final dialog. Let's look at The Marvel Method in more detail.

When did the Marvel Method begin?

The "Marvel Method" was in place long before Fantastic Four issue 1. This is from "Secrets Behind the Comics", where Stan talks about scripts, and also about artists who like to write:


Note the picture of the script: panels on one side, dialog in the margins. Compare this to the pencils of the Fantastic Four, elsewhere on this page. This is exactly what Jack Kirby produced for Stan Lee, except that instead of describing each picture he drew it. He put the dialog is in the margins, and Stan then approved or changed it. Exactly as Stan describes it.

Later we will look at the story conferences, and the document for FF issue 1 that Stan called a "synopsis". The synopsis refers to the meeting between the writer and Stan Lee, whereas the script refers to the frames and dialog, such as Kirby produced. Now let us look at how Stan described the life of a writer-artist:

1947 book

This is exactly how Jack Kirby described the process: Jack had the ideas, then Stan would approve or change them and add his own ideas. But Stan was in overall control. He especially needed to show his control in the case of Jack Kirby, because Kirby had previously created a multi-million dollar idea, then left to work for rivals. Besides, Stan Lee was genuinely better at dialog than Jack was. So when Stan changed Jack's dialog he usually improved the result.

This is not to say that Stan never wrote scripts. Stan wrote a lot of scripts! A lot of artists didn't want to do plotting, or weren't good at it. At these times Stan wrote a full script, and al the ideas are his. For a comparison of Stan's scripts and Jack's scripts click here.

Stan's book mentioned that a writer-artist always discussed the story synopsis first. What were these meetings like? How detailed was he discussion?

What were those story conferences like?

We have seen that later story conferences were often nothing more than Kirby telling Lee what he planned. But everything hinges on the early story conferences. Is that where Stan provided the key ideas? We only have one direct eye witness account of a full story conference (Flo Steinberg reports hearing them in the early days, but they were behind closed doors so we can't know who came up with what) . In late 1965 the reporter Nat Freedland visited the Marvel offices for an article published in the New York Herald Tribune, January 9th 1966. In part of it he reports on a "weekly Friday morning summit meeting with Jack 'King' Kirby". This is what Freedland wrote (as reprinted in the Collected Jack Kirby Collector, Volume 4):

Nat Freedland article

The date and content indicates they are planning FF55. At first this supports the idea that Stan Lee came up with all the ideas. But look closer:

From this we learn that:

  1. Stan did not know what was going on
  2. Whatever Stan said, Kirby ignored most of it or deliberately did the opposite
  3. Kirby had no interest in what Stan was saying and did not like being there
  4. Stan's plans for this issue interrupted the normal issue flow
  5. Stan greatly exaggerated his writing ability (e.g. about winning a writing competition three times)

So this meeting was almost certainly expanded because the journalist wanted it. After all, if you're planning  a major newspaper item then you want to report that you have seen the inner workings. So Stan played the part. However, when this story was published it made Kirby look weak. Roz (Jack's wife) was mad. This article was a major contributor to Jack's disaffection with Marvel. Flo Steinberg has reported that in the early days Jack used to come in weekly or even more, and their story conferences could become noisy, with stories acted out. But after this we were more likely to have Jack's recollection of him just coming to the office every two weeks or so to drop off his work, and the story conferences being little more than a brief phone call.

The very first conference
The most important story conference of all is discussed further down the page: the conference before issue 1. We will see the same pattern: Stan wrote it, and Jack ignored most of what Stan said: Jack didn't even see the typed up notes.

Two thirds of the finished comic was not in the synopsis, much of what Stan did say was ignored, and the parts that did end up in the comic reflected Jack's earlier work. E,g, Jack had created many creature called "The Thing", he was familiar with the earlier Human Torch from his work on Captain America, and so on. In short, nobody is denying that Stan and Jack spoke before each issue, or that Stan could write comics, or that Stan liked to be in control.  But Jack did not think much of Stan's ideas and ended up using his own.

John Romita's recollection
John Romita recalls times where Stan and Jack planned a story:

"I was present at at least two plotting sessions of John — Jack and Stan Lee. They were the same as my plotting sessions and the same as Gene Colan’s and Herb Trimpe’s and John Buscema. John Buscema actually did his plotting by phone, because he lived two hours away from the city."

So "plotting session" could sometimes meant just a phone call. This is how it went:

"One guy would make a suggestion, Jack would say, 'that’s not a bad idea, but what if we did it this way,' and then Stan would say, 'okay, but only if we did it that way' and 'only if we did it this way.' They were both talking different plots and it’s -and the reason I know it is because when Stan and I would plot, I foolishly did it from memory. I never recorded it."

So Stan and Jack were "both talking different plots". Romita gives more detail in another interview

"CBA: In the past, you’ve told that great anecdote about realizing they weren’t listening to the other!

"John: I knew that even when I heard them plotting in other instances! [laughter] Jack would say, “Stanley, I think I’ve got an idea. How ’bout this?” Stan would say, “That’s not bad, Jack, but I’d rather see it this way.” Jack would absolutely forget what Stan said, and Stan would forget what Jack said. [laughter] I would bet my house that Jack never read the books after Stan wrote them; that’s why he could claim with a straight face that Stan never wrote anything except what Jack put in the notes. He was kidding himself; he never read them." (source)

Romita then mentioned Jack's (mainly Roz's) reaction to the Herald-Tribune article:

"CBA: Did you see any of the problems Jack was having?
"John: I had heard all of the inside stuff, like from the Herald-Tribune article that insulted Jack, that he thought Stan was a part of. Stan could not convince him of that, and certainly could not convince Roz that Stan hadn’t encouraged the writer to make fun of Jack. I know for a fact that Stan would rather bite his tongue than say such a thing, because Jack’s success would’ve been his success. There’s no reason to run Jack down. Stan had the position; he didn’t have to fight Jack for it. I don’t think Jack ever wanted the editorial position; if he wanted credit, he deserved credit. Stan used to give him credit all the time; he used to say most of these ideas are more than half Jack’s. Why they would think Stan would try to make him look bad in print is beyond me; but from that time on—which is very close to when I started there in the middle ’60s—when the Herald-Tribune article came out, there were very strained relations, and I thought it was a matter of time before Jack would leave..."

The bottom line: Jack ignored Stan as far as possible
The bottom line is that yes, Stan would meet with Jack before a story, and Jack ignored everything Stan said. Or at least as far as he could: Stan was the boss so Jack couldn't ignore it completely). So Jack was correct when he said that Stan did not write the stories, and that he (Jack) never saw the synopsis to issue 1.

Did Stan Lee improve Kirby's work?

Sometimes Stan did not understand Jack's story. This is further evidence that Jack wrote them and Stan simply added dialog. See FF 15 for a good example: Kirby understood DNA and wrote a story about it. Stan did not, so he changed the story. For other examples of changed stories see FF 8, FF 23, FF 67, FF 108, etc.

There is no doubt that Stan's changes and his dialog made Jack's work easier to read. I would never have persevered with Jack Kirby if not for Stan's easy dialog. But did Stan improve the stories? Or merely dumb them down? 

The golden age of the Fantastic Four is generally agreed to be twenty issues either side of FF 50. This coincides with the period when Stan became too busy to do much beyond add the dialog. This golden era ended when Jack began holding back his best ideas (to become part of the New Gods). Then when Jack left, the quality dropped again.

In Stan's defence, we do have a record of one change he made that allegedly improved a Kirby story. So let's look at that claim in detail.

Stan Lee's changes to the Black Panther

T'Challa, the character who we know as the Black Panther was created by Jack Kirby as the "Coal Tiger". He had tiger stripes on his costume and no face mask. Stan told Jack to change the name to "Black Panther", make the costume all black, and add a full face mask. Most fans say this was a great improvement. They say "Coal Tiger" sounds silly and the new costume is cool. This is of course a matter of opinion. But we cannot overlook the serious problems with the changes. For example, while Jack's original design showed T'Challa's face, Stan wanted it covered. So Jack gave T'Challa a half mask. But Stan wanted T'Challa's face completely covered, and a redrawn cover: the new cover pushes T'Challa into the background.

cover comparison

Why cover his face? Perhaps to be a big reveal? Perhaps because he was a man of mystery? But so was Black Bolt, so was Gorgon, Galactus, the Silver Surfer, and pretty much every Kirby character from this time period. Only the black guy has to hide his face. Why? Well, whenever comics showed a black character (in this period), they got letters of complaint.

“‘comic characters are a white man’s land,’ admits Alfred Andriola, artist and co-creator of Herry Drake, ‘let’s face it. you can’t deal with race or color in comics. a colored maid or porter brings on a flood of letters. and if we show the negro as a hero we get angry letters from the south.’” (Source: "How The Funnies Handle Race", Ebony, November 1966, just a few months after FF 52.)

So black characters were seldom seen. And when, four years earlier, DC reprinted a British adaptation of a movie that had some black people ("Dr No"), they recolored the black faces to be white. (source).

In his defence, Stan did allow T'Challa to take off his mask at the end of the story. But by then the comic was paid for and hopefully the reader liked it. And after that black characters became a little more common.

"There may have been some internal hand-wringing about the Black Panther. The first version of the cover had shown the Panther's black skin; the published version did not. Previews in other titles that month suggest Marvel couldn't decide how much of him to show-or how to characterize him. "Don't miss the mystery villain of the month!" read the ads, which blocked out the cover art. (Once Marvel committed to a policy of representing black characters, however, change came quickly. The cover of the following month's romance comic Modeling with Millie proudly introduced a black British model named Jill Jerold to its cast." (source: Marvel the Untold Story)

"Tiger, tiger, burning bright"

Coal Tiger would be an awesome name if not for our racist assumptions. T'Challa's life is summed up by Blake's famous poem:

TIGER, tiger, burning bright 
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?
In what distant deeps or skies
Burnt the fire of thine eyes? 
On what wings dare he aspire?
What the hand dare seize the fire?
And what shoulder and what art
Could twist the sinews of thy heart?
And when thy heart began to beat,     
What dread hand and what dread feet?     
What the hammer? what the chain?     
In what furnace was thy brain?     
What the anvil? What dread grasp
Dare its deadly terrors clasp?     
When the stars threw down their spears,     
And water'd heaven with their tears,     
Did He smile His work to see?     
Did He who made the lamb make thee?
Tiger, tiger, burning bright     
In the forests of the night,     
What immortal hand or eye     
Dare frame thy fearful symmetry?
T-Shirt from
Blake's "Tyger Tyger" from

Hot coals of vengeance!
Coal's main property is that it burns! Being black is only secondary. And when it burns it's red on the inside, like TChalla's cape. To better understand the symbolism of coals, look to Shakespeare. Occasionally it means "coal black" or red, but usually coal refers to fire, and passion, and vengeance!

To make coals cheap,--a noble memory!   Coriolanus: V, i
And all eyes else dead coals! fear thou no wife;   The Winter's Tale: V, i
Your breath first kindled the dead coal of wars   King John: V, ii
There is no malice in this burning coal;   King John: IV, i
The cat, with eyne of burning coal,   Pericles, Prince of Tyre: II, v
That I have blown this coal: I do deny it:   King Henry VIII: II, iv
Than is the coal of fire upon the ice,   Coriolanus: I, i
Men would carry coals. they would have me as   King Henry V: III, ii
Is kindling coals that fires all my breast,   King Henry VI, part III: II, i
If he could burn us all into one coal,   Coriolanus: IV, vi
Hot coals of vengeance! let no soldier fly.   King Henry VI, part II: V, ii
Have blown this coal betwixt my lord and me;   King Henry VIII: II, iv
Faith, at the latter end of a sea-coal fire.   Merry Wives of Windsor: I, iv
At the round table, by a sea-coal fire, upon   King Henry IV, part II: II, i
And add more coals to cancer when he burns   Toilus and Cressida: II, iii
A coal of fire, sometimes plue and sometimes red;   King Henry V: III, vi
Gregory, o' my word, we'll not carry coals.   Romeo and Juliet: I, i

Look at T'Challa's story: he is smouldering with vengeance since Klaw murdered his father long ago. He is like a fire that will not go out. Shakespeare would have understood the name. I could also go further back and cite hot coals in the Bible (what with Kirby being Jewish) but I hope I have made my point.

Tigers are cooler than panthers (and less racist)
The name "tiger" suggests strength and beauty. But "panther" is more about being black (panthers are black). And to make it super clear, Stan wanted "black panther": or "BLACK black cat". Add the totally black costume and it looks like Stan saw T'Challa as just one thing: black. T'Challa was being defined by his skin color.

What our reaction to "coal tiger" says about us
Everyone seems to think "coal tiger" refers to skin color. But do not take the same approach to white people. Is Emma Frost (the White Queen), named "Frost" because of her frost-white skin? No. The color is not the point, its about coldness (just as coal is about heat).

Emma Frost

Is Pinky Pinkerton (of the Howling Commandos) named for his pink skin? No, other connotations of "pinky" are more important.


We ignore color when it comes to white people. But a black man? Coal must be about color. Because color is all he is, apparently.

The political name

The name "Black Panther" later caused problems because it was also the name of a controversial political group,. So in FF 119 Stan tried to change it.

black leopard

That was just bad luck, right? The Black Panther party did not begin until October 1966, a few months after FF 52 came out. But it got its name from a black panther party that was active in Alabama in 1965 (source)

black panther party
(Image: from the 1965 elections in Alabama. Source: credits Doug Harris)


In 1966, shortly before FF 52 was created, the New York Times ran an article about that Black Panther party (source).  Jack Kirby was an avid reader and observer of trends. So Jack avoided the naming problem. But Stan Lee walked right into it and later regretted it.

The problematic costume
Jack Kirby's costume doesn't look as good as Stan's idea, right?

panther costume

But look closer: it's the exact same costume, complete with side cape, strap, stripes on the gloves and boots, and so on. The only difference is the absence of color, and removing the tiger stripes on the torso. Sure, Jack's character design looks garish, but it's supposed to: it is a reference design, for the purpose of highlighting details. The finished comic shows how it looks in practice. All Stan did was make it all black. Jack's version would have looked exactly the same, but with a splash of color. Was removing color a good idea? Aesthetically it's is a matter of opinion. Some people will prefer one, some the other. But again it opens Stan up to the racist charge. This is why:

When Jack thought of T'Challa he thought of a tiger! The symbol of strength and beauty! His costume was bright and proud! Jack's intended cover was bright, with T'Challa dominating the scene! Jack's Coal Tiger was proud and strong! But Lee's changes pushed him into the shadows. Throughout history, white people have preferred that black people stay hidden. I don't suppose Stan Lee intended it that way. It's just another unfortunate accident, along with the full face mask and political connotations. But Stan has a lot of these accidents, and Jack doesn't.

The question of creativity
Finally, Stan's name change and costume change caused a problem because there was already a character called the panther who had an all-black costume, from Two Gun Kid issue 77. Reusing it just creates confusion.

Two Gun Kid

However, this does allow us to make a useful comparison. Here we have two "black panther" characters, and the only difference is that one is entirely by Stan Lee and the other is by Stan Lee with Jack Kirby. The Stan Lee character is a guy who dresses up in a costume to scare people. It was instantly forgotten. But add Kirby to the mix and we have a character who makes history (first black superhero), with a rich and fascinating back story, who supports his own comic titles over the years, and is about to become a major Hollywood movie (I write this in July 2016). So what does the black Panther tell us about who contributed what? You decide.

Lee's position is not under threat
This is starting to sound like an attack on Stan Lee. So again I must emphasise Lees' achievements. Stan made the business work. Stan connected different creators' stories and thus created the connected Marvel Universe. Stan raised the profile of artists and writers, and tirelessly built an audience of millions. Stan wrote easier to read stories. Stan connected with people in a way that Jack Kirby could not. Stan deserves his millions and his fame. But this page is about a narrow question: who did what in writing the Fantastic Four?

When did Kirby begin writing the FF?

There is plenty of evidence Kirby plotted the later issues (marginal notes, Stan Lee's comments, etc.). But some people think he did not plot the first 20 or so issues:

"The earliest Fantastic Four page scan that I can find with Kirby’s notes is from F.F. Annual #2, appearing in the summer of 1964. Comic Book historian, Nick Caputo concludes that the Jack Kirby’s margin notes first appear in The Avengers #6, dated July 1964. If one looks at the notes in the upper margin, it is clear that it is Kirby’s lettering. Thus we can probably date the beginning of the Marvel Method to this approximate period." (source)

"Also, on other pages of original art from pre-1964, no notes are found (other than editorial notes left by Stan). So sometime during 1964 Jack begins the process of leaving notes in the borders of the artwork." (source)

However, other collectors do have evidence of earlier notes. James Robert Smith refers to Hulk 4, which has the same cover date as FF issue 8:

"It was when I was collecting Silver Age artwork in the late 1980s that I realized that it was Jack Kirby all along who was writing the books Stan Lee claimed to have written and created. My earliest pages were from Incredible Hulk #4 and it was obvious from the hand written notes from Kirby that he was writing the book and Lee’s only contribution was in sometimes pumping up the dialog. Lee was an editor. A very good editor, but nothing more than that." (source)

Inkers would of course erase the pencils, so any notes within the panels (and sometimes the others) would be gone.

"I have a Kirby / Romita Daredevil page where a prior owner erased Jack's pencil notes. Kirby's notes sometimes differed from Stan Lee's final balloons/ captions and it's fun to see how the match or don't." (source)

But Kirby's writing is mainly through his art. Most pages in the early issues did not need additional notes: you can remove the dialog and still see what is going on. But as Kirby's stories became more cosmic then additional notes were needed.

Here's a good example of the earlier issues needing fewer notes: the last page of FF 40:


Noe that the notes have been erased. But in this case they still show through a little, so I have enhanced them:

top of page

Compare this story to the page shown earlier. This story is from an earlier year, is less cosmic. So it is easy to follow even without notes. 

more notes 

This example shows
how the pages were
trimmed before printing:
the surviving page
only shows part of
what Kirby wrote.   

On a tangent, I saw this page on an auction site. The current bid is $15,000, and there are still three days to go.


How much was Kirby paid for this page? What fraction of that $15,000? According to John Romita, the page rate at the end of the 1950s was cut to $24 (see Icons of the American Comic Book" p.412). It may have gone up a little by 1965, but probably not by much. That's all Jack Kirby's family ever saw.

Evidence from FF 3

Here is the earliest evidence I can find for how the Marvel Method went at the beginning of the FF. This is an original page from FF 3. Unusually it has a "please turn over" mark, and notes from Stan on the back.


It looks like Stan was asking for a change. Note the big arrow: he wants something moved. And note the pencil writing on the original frame the arrow referred to: it's hard to make out what the original dialog was supposed to be, but the last word is definitely "Thing" - a word that now appears in the first frame. So it seems most likely that, for that arrow, Stan was just asking for the last panel to become the first one. It also looks like Stan added the whole sequence at the top.

The pacing in the top half of the finished page, and the bottom half of the previous one, is odd. Lots of jumping around without it being clear how each image leads to the next. Kirby generally drew like a movie, where each frame leads to the next.  So here is what I think happened:

If we start from the premise that Kirby's art tends to move smoothly from frame to frame, then page 4 somehow got the team from the fight at the theatre to the new headquarters on page 6. So I presume the headquarters diagram on page 5 was originally there, and the two half pages in between somehow got us from the fight to the headquarters. The sequence probably focused on Ben's anger: Kirby tends to fill his stories with action, and Ben's anger was a big deal in the early issues.

Stan would have looked at this and thought "we are five pages in and haven't seen a clear direction with a clear hero and villain". He wanted to emphasise the Miracle Man as an individual, and make a contrast with Reed as an individual. So in his changed version we get close ups of both men: Reed sums up the conflict (the one foe they could not defeat), the Miracle Man has  a monolog, we get a foreshadowing of the monster, and it ends with Sue saying how wonderful Reed is. That's all classic Stan (in my opinion, based on Stan's solo comic writing).

I think this was a good change, and illustrates what Stan added to the the story: he made it clearer and more personal, All of Stan's stories are clear and they are personal: as people often say, Jack provides the divinity, Stan adds the humanity. With Stan we always know who the good guys and bad guys are, we always feel close to them, and we never get lost.

Contrast this with what we know of Kirby's solo work. On usual monster stories (Jack's previous work) we don't have time to get to know the characters very personally (the whole thing has to be over in 8 pages). When we look at Kirby's later Fourth World stuff it's the same: all cinematic action, but sometimes hard to follow, and readers don't feel an intimate connection with the characters as friends.

I think Stan's changes here are a good example of why he was needed, even though the changes break the smooth flow. Kirby created the story (after a chat with Stan, were Stan was the boss). Then Stan sometimes asked for changes. Then Stan scripted the dialog, just as he explained back in 1947, and just as we see from the notes on later pages.

Did Kirby exaggerate his role?

Kirby said he basically created everything, more or less. Some people say he exaggerated. This is their case:

  1. Kirby never said it at the time?
    The best known Kirby interviews are from the late 1980s, when he was bitter about not getting his art back. Critics say that there was none of this bad feeling in the 1960s, when Stan and Jack got along fine.
  2. Kirby's memory
    Kirby's description of how he came to join Marvel and how the FF were created has been questioned.
  3. Creating Spider-Man
    Kirby also claimed to create Spider-Man, but most people believe Spider-man was created by Stan Lee and Steve Ditko.
  4. The synopsis to issue 1
    The original synopsis for Fantastic Four 1 still exists, and it's by Stan Lee.
  5. The synopsis to issue 8
    The synopsis to issue 8 also exists, and it's by Stan Lee.

Those claims will now be examined in depth.

Kirby never said it at the time?

In researching this page I tracked down every Kirby interview I could find, and he has always been consistent: he created the plots, and always did it that way (at least with regard to Marvel). the best early interview I can find is from the 1970 comic convention a few months after he left Marvel. It's only available in audio, but it is good to hear Kirby's own words, so I clipped out a couple of relevant pieces. Click to hear Kirby say it himself:

Kirby in his own words: he always created his own stories
(the audio is poor at the start, but Kirby's answer is clear)

Kirby is fair. He implies that Stan did have some input, at least in the earliest issues days. In this clip he simply says that he (Kirby) simply "had a hand in" creating Doctor Doom:

Kirby in his own words: on creating Dr Doom (and not creating the Red Skull)

(He also refers to Edward Herron, who co-created Captain Marvel Junior.)

The comics tell their own story

Even if Kirby had said nothing the comics speak for themselves. Right from the start it is clear that Lee's dialog often contradicts Kirby's art. That is, Kirby is not drawing what Lee wanted, but Lee is adding text afterwards.

We see this most clearly with Sue Storm. Kirby draws her as an equal partner, able to defeat enemies on her own. But whenever Kirby does that, Lee adds dialog saying that really it was Reed's doing, even though it makes no sense in context. I mean, since when was Reed a world class judo expert? But Lee seems to be thinking of old style superhero stories where the male lead is always The Greatest Hero and everything must be by him. Kirby's respect for strong women is inspiring, but Lee's sexism now looks very dated.


These changes are there right from issue 1. The excellent Baxter Building podcast points out that the ending makes no sense (without a lot of interpretation). How could they trap the Mole Man underground? He had monsters who can dig through solid rock! but take the dialog away and you see a completely different story:
Ff 1 end

Kirby's art in the final panels shows the Torch filling the tunnels with flame, which suggests that they cause the explosion. But Lee can't have a hero doing that, so his dialog says that the Mole Man destroyed his own base, so ending the threat (which confuses readers, as clearly he would get away first: whereas blowing him up, as the art suggests, would have stopped him).

So the comics themselves conform what Kirby and others said: right from the start Kirby was creating his stories, with Lee then added dialog.

But Kirby was fine with that?
Kirby did not become angry until later when he felt promises had been broken (and he was treated as replaceable). He did not say anything very negative about Stan until around the very end of the 1980s. But as this interview (from 1986-88) implies, the feelings there before that, and his wife had to step in and stop him. So he made an effort to be nice.

"PITTS: What input, then, did Stan Lee have in creating Spider-Man and these other characters?
KIRBY: Stan Lee had never created anything up to that moment. And here was Marvel with characters like the Sub-Mariner, which they never used. Stan Lee didn’t create that; that was created by Bill Everett. Stan Lee didn’t create the Human Torch; that was created by Carl Burgos. It was the artists that were creating everything. Stan Lee– I don’t know if he had other duties… or whatever he did there…

ROZ: Maybe we shouldn’t get into… too much characterization. I mean–
Kirby: [...] Actually, we were pretty good friends. I know Stan Lee better than probably any other person. I know Stan Lee as a person… I never was angry with him in any way. He was never angry with me in any way. We went to the cartoonists’ society together." (source)

Kirby's memory

The two accounts do not necessarily contradict each other.
Kirby arrived in late 1958, but the FF did not arrive until early 1961. Kirby only made the comics Lee told him to, because Kirby did not have the authority to start a new comic on his own. Stan Lee's account is that his publisher (Martin Goodman) told him to make a superhero team, and Stan decided it should be realistic. This is very likely: Stan had always wanted to be in Hollywood and considered comics to be silly. But Stan's version glosses over how "make a realistic comic book" translated into the exact details of the Fantastic Four. The usual pattern in creating a comic was this:

  1. Martin Goodman notices that something makes money, so tells Stan Lee "do that."
  2. Stan then has a meeting with Kirby and says "this is what we need." They discuss ideas.
  3. Kirby then comes up with the characters, the plots, and the art.
  4. Lee then adds dialog.

In the early days the initial discussion between Lee and Kirby might be half and hour or more. But as Lee it became busier the meeting became shorter, until Lee would say something like "bring back Doctor Doom" and Kirby would to the rest, then hand back the story with notes for Lee to add dialog.

How Kirby joined Marvel in 1958
Wikipedia sums up how Kirby joined Marvel:

"[Kirby] recalled that in late 1958,

I came in [to the Marvel offices] and they were moving out the furniture, they were taking desks out — and I needed the work! ... Stan Lee is sitting on a chair crying. He didn't know what to do, he's sitting on a chair crying — he was still just out of his adolescence [Note: Lee, born Dec. 28, 1922, would actually have been about 36.] I told him to stop crying. I says, 'Go in to Martin and tell him to stop moving the furniture out, and I'll see that the books make money'.

The interviewer, The Comics Journal publisher Gary Groth, later wrote of this interview in general, 'Some of Kirby's more extreme statements ... should be taken with a grain of salt....' Lee, specifically asked about the office-closing anecdote, said,

I never remember being there when people were moving out the furniture. If they ever moved the furniture, they did it during the weekend when everybody was home. Jack tended toward hyperbole, just like the time he was quoted as saying that he came in and I was crying and I said, 'Please save the company!' I'm not a crier and I would never have said that. I was very happy that Jack was there and I loved working with him, but I never cried to him. (laughs)"

Were they moving out the furniture?
The furniture anecdote was told decades later. At other times Kirby said it like this:

“Marvel was on its ass, literally, and when I came around, they were practically hauling out the furniture,” Kirby said. “They were beginning to move, and Stan Lee was sitting there crying. I told them to hold everything, and I pledged that I would give them the kind of books that would up their sales and keep them in business.” (Sean Howe, "Marvel the Untold Story," prologue)

Note the word "practically" and the context "they were beginning to move." The Wikipedia article on Atlas comics (Marvel's name at the time) noted that Kirby's first work was to freelance "on five issues cover-dated December 1956 and February 1957" but he did not do other work until he was formally hired in 1958, then his first published work was cover dated December 1958. Between those times the company lost its distributor and so its output crashed. The article quotes Stan Lee:

"[We had been] turning out 40, 50, 60 books a month, maybe more, and [now] the only company we could get to distribute our books was our closest rival, National [DC] Comics. Suddenly we went ... to either eight or 12 books a month, which was all Independent News Distributors would accept from us"

This led to many lay offs. The article quotes Joe Sinnott:

"Stan called me and said, 'Joe, Martin Goodman told me to suspend operations because I have all this artwork in house and have to use it up before I can hire you again.' It turned out to be six months, in my case. He may have called back some of the other artists later, but that's what happened with me.

So they went from needing enough people for sixty titles a month to needing nobody for a while, then needing a much smaller staff. Obviously fewer desks were needed, so Kirby was right about this general period: yes, they were moving out furniture.

Did Stan Lee cry?
Stan Lee was known to take it personally when he had to bring bad news to staff. He genuinely cared, and felt it deeply when bad things happened, as recorded in Howe's "Marvel the Untold Story" and various interviews. And one man's depressed sniffle is another man's "crying." So this may be just shorthand for how Stan was obviously feeling at the time.

In short, Kirby does not contradict Lee in any serious way. It's all a matter of interpretation.

Who created Spider-Man?

Kirby's credibility depends on Spider-Man. Kirby once added Spider-man to the list of characters he created, and this has been used as proof that Kirby exaggerated, because "everybody knows" that Spider-man was created by Stan Lee and Steve Ditko. Well yes, but in the 1970s "everybody knew" that Stan Lee created Spider-Man mostly on his own. What "everybody knows" can be wrong: the argument from "everybody knows" is a classic logical fallacy, "argumentum ad populem". We need to avoid fallacies and look for evidence instead.

The question "who created" depends on how we define the word "created." Does it mean "who had the initial idea", or "who added the details", or "who made an idea popular"? Those are three different questions. Similarly "who wrote a story" can mean different things. Does it mean "who had the plot idea" or "who broke it down into a detailed story" or "who added the dialog"? Kirby was clear that Steve Ditko deserves the credit for Spider-man's success. but simply as a matter of historical record, he was deeply involved in the initial creation.

PITTS: You say you created Spider-Man. How different was your initial concept from the Spider-Man we all know?
KIRBY: My initial concept was practically the same. But the credit for developing Spider-Man goes to Steve Ditko; he wrote it and he drew it and he refined it. Steve Ditko is a thorough professional. And he an intellect. Personality wise, he’s a bit withdrawn, but there are lots of people like that. But Steve Ditko, despite the fact that he doesn’t disco– although he may now; I haven’t seen him for a long time– Steve developed Spider-Man and made a salable item out of it." (source)

So let's look at how Spider-man was created and where Kirby was probably involved. Here is the order of events, according to Wikipedia plus the exhaustive article by Stan Taylor.
  1. The Silver Spider
    In 1954 Kirby and Joe Simon (mainly Simon) developed the Silver Spider, but did not use him. It featured an orphaned boy living with an old couple finds a magic ring that granted him extra strength, including the ability to leap.
  2. Web fluid
    Their publisher then suggested some changes: "a tall thin wiry person with long legs and arms." and he "could accomplish great acrobatic tricks, an almost flight, by use of silken ropes that would enable him to swing ala Tarzan, or a Batman.   The silken threads that the spider would use might come from a special liquid, from some part of his costume that would become silken threads in much the same way as the spider insect.  These threads would also be used in making of a web, which could also be used as a net."
  3. The name "Spider Man"
    "Simon had rejected a working title 'Spider-man' for his Silver Spider project, and showed a logo to Kirby, leaving little doubt as to which of the three people involved with Spider-Man would have been the source for the name." Eventually the Silver Spider idea was shelved, and never used. 1954 was the same year that Ben Carson, the biggest Halloween costume designer in America, began selling a "Spider man" costume (the surviving versions are all in yellow, not red). So that lends credibility to the date.
    mask photo with eyes
  4. The full face mask
    A key claim is the full face mask that Ditko says he chose to hide the fact that Spider-man was young. But many of Kirby's characters had full masks: from his first ever character, the Lone Rider, through to Iron Man, Dr Doom, Mr Miracle, etc. So this is not conclusive either, though Ditko has no reason to lie. The Halloween costume had the same concentric web pattern, iconic black around the eyes (in some versions), and spider logo on the chest, though there is no proof that Ditko saw it.
    1954 costume
  5. The big white eyes
    In 1968 (long before the issue of who created what became a hot topic) Kirby mentioned that he created the pre-Marvel Vision's costume with big white eyes, "the fore-runner of the Spider-man and silver surfer eyes", perhaps implying that he created all three. We know for certain he created the other two.
  6. Origin
    In 1957 Kirby drew the story "The Ant Extract" in which a meek scientist discovers a serum that gives him the proportional strength of an ant.  Because of his new power, the scientist is feared and ostracized by authorities."
  7. Peter Parker
    In the late 1950s Kirby proposed a strip called "Chip Hardy" - a college freshman on a science scholarship. "Moose Mulligan, the campus jock, teased young Chip about why he didn't try out for football, instead of 'hiding behind a mess of test tubes'.  Other students followed suit and mocked the youngster, labeling all science majors as "squares". Eventually, this taunting escalated into a physical confrontation between Moose and Hardy, with young Chip getting the better of it, mimicking exactly the character template and early relationship between Peter Parker, Flash Thompson, and the other school mates."
  8. Peter Parr
    At the same time Kirby created a character for another strip named 'Peter Parr'.
  9. The Fly
    In 1959 Kirby and Simon created the Fly, who clings to walls, senses danger, and is super strong (he could also fly). "The first use of his powers is to bring to justice, a petty crook that had assaulted his guardian."
    "Contrary to what Lee wrote in Origins of Marvel Comics, the real reason Kirby's version of Spider-Man was rejected was not that his Spidey looked 'too heroic' but that, as Ditko pointed out to Lee after perusing Kirby's first few pages, it too closely resembled The Fly, a character co-created by Kirby and his previous partner, Joe Simon (and the Fly was originally the Silver Spider)." - Fred W. Hill
  10. Spider Spry
    The Fly issue 1 had an enemy called "Spider Spry" with thin legs and a bulbous head, who "walks up thin silken lines, traps the Fly in a web-like net, and wears a colorful costume complete with a spider icon."  
  11. The emblem
    In 1958 a Charlton comic that Ditko either drew or was familiar with had webbing patterns like on Spider-Man's costume, as did a Halloween costume available at the time. So was it all Ditko? Probably the webbing was. Spider-man's spider image on the back does not look like the one on the front, and looks more like a tick than a spider. Just like the emblem on Spider Spry.
  12. Uncle Ben
    In 1959 Kirby also created "Lancelot Strong, aka The Shield, is an orphaned high school senior, and like Peter Parker, his surrogate parents were gentle, compassionate, and supportive.  His powers were the result of a scientific experiment, in this case, genetic engineering." "While rushing off to test his new-found powers against a rampaging alien monster, The Shield, (Lancelot Strong), in his teen exuberance, ignores and leaves his best friend Spud in harms way.   After defeating the brute, the Shield returns to celebrate his triumph only to learn that the monster has killed Spud. The distraught Shield blames himself, and vows that it will never happen again."
  13. The bookworm
    In 1961 Kirby draw "I Dared to Battle the Crawling Monster" It was possibly dialogged by Larry Lieber (not his brother Stan Lee).  "The hero is a high school student, a skinny, dorky, academic sort, laughed at by the jocks for his lack of athletic ability, and taunted by the girls.  Typically, by the end of the story, it is the bookworm, not the jock who saves the world.  Even the visuals of the lead character strongly resemble the Peter Parker character as shown in AF#15."
  14. Lee and Ditko's earlier work
    For comparison, neither Stan Lee nor Steve Ditko had anything like these.
  15. Kirby showed Lee
    In 1963 Goodman asked Stan Lee for a new superhero. Lee had a meeting with to Kirby. Kirby showed the Spider character to Lee, who liked it.
  16. Goodman's decision
    Martin Goodman approves the name and "ordinary teen" concept
  17. The first six pages
    Kirby then drew the first six pages, and Ditko was going to ink it. Lee decided it looked too heroic, and asked Ditko to re-do it. Ditko says he only saw five pages from Kirby: they did not show Spider-man after the transformation.
  18. The magic ring
    At some point someone said to drop Sta's idea of using a magic ring to gain the powers. The Kirby art that Ditko saw did not include the transformation so nobody knows who said this.
  19. The cover
    Lee did not like Ditko's cover, so got Kirby to pencil it.
  20. Lee's dialog
    Lee is definitely responsible for one thing: the dialog that's filled with self doubt. Self doubt was a Stan Lee thing, not a Kirby thing.
  21. The first three stories
    The first three issues (Amazing Fantasy 15, and Amazing Spider-man 1 and 2) are full of elements from Kirby stories (see the Stan Taylor article) and typical Kirby elements like spaceships and aliens. The stories then settle down to the kind of cerebral plots that Lee and Ditko used to do on their own.
  22. After those three issues
    Lee and Ditko then did the rest up to issue 38. Toward the end Ditko did not speak to Lee at all, but delivered the pages ready for dialog. This is important. Nobody disagrees that after issue 1 Spider-man's is Steve Ditko's baby. The character changed and evolved. Ditko was a creative genius. Spider-man 1 to 36 is a tremendous story in its own right, with a beginning, middle and end (for his last two issues Ditko seemed to just "phone it in" as they say.) But "who created Spider-man" is a different question, a very narrow question about who got him to the first issue.
  23. The costume
    Ditko later claimed to have designed the iconic costume. But the official Marvel publication FOOM (issue 11, 1975) said it was Kirby. It was normal for Kirby to create character designs for other artists.
  24. The shoes
    Ditko's memory can be unreliable, just as anyone's can. He says he gave Spider-man soft soled shoes for climbing, and others have claimed that Kirby always used full boots. But issues 1-3 of Spider-man show him with hard soled shoes. Meanwhile Kirby did not give hard shoes to his climbing characters (e.g. Spider Spry, Toad, Cobra, the Beast).
  25. Belt, but no shorts
    During this time Kirby's costumes tended to have belts and shorts. Ditko's costumes (e.g. Captain Atom, Vulture, Mysterio, Kraven) tended not to have either. Spider-man has a belt (it's where he kept spare webbing) but not shorts, so this is inconclusive.
  26. 1976 changed everything
    In 1976 the law on work for hire changed, so suddenly Kirby was able to sue if it could be proven that he created the characters. If he won, Marvel would have to pay millions of dollars (today, billions) in royalties owed.
  27. The missing costume proposal
    Jim Shooter says he saw Kirby's costume proposal in the 1970s, but since then it mysteriously disappeared.
  28. Stan takes credit
    In 1977 Stan Lee published an article entitled "How I created Spider-Man".

This raises some questions:

  1. Was the costume the key? The genius move was to make it simple, and covering everything. Just as Kirby did with the Black Panther or Black Bolt or... the Fantastic Four (apart from the hoods). The Panther's mouth was only covered at the inking stage: with Ditko as the inker perhaps the same would have happened.
  2. Was self doubt the key? This is just one aspect of the character, and perhaps the only unique thing Lee added.
  3. Can Kirby not do teen stories? He and Simon invented the romance genre, and some of his best work is about his boyhood on the streets. Yes, he can draw teens.
  4. Was Ditko's skinny style essential? No, Kirby did the first two covers, and after 38 issues of Ditko, John Romita took over, made Spider-man look more like a Kirby hero, and sales went up.

Jim Shooter on the Kirby Spider-Man costume

"RE:  Kirby Spider-Man pages: I saw, and held in my hand, exactly one such page. It was a page of design drawings. I remember that his version of Spider-Man had a "Web-Gun" and wore trunks, I think, like Captain America's. He was far bigger and bulkier than Ditko's version. There were no similarities to Ditko's Spider-Man costume. I think he had boots with flaps. There were notes in he margin that described the character, again, nothing like the Ditko version. I think there was something about him being related to, or having some connection with a police official, which was how he'd find out about trouble going on.  It was a long time ago, I can't swear to that last item, but I can swear to the fact that it wasn't similar to the Ditko version. I remember thinking, "This isn't at all like Ditko's."

P.S.  I must have seen that page when I was in Sol's office and he was going through the rejects stack looking for pages for me to try inking.  I don't think I ever got to look through those pages again.

P.P.S.  Years later, 1986, I had occasion to talk with Jack at the San Diego Con. He insisted that he created Spider-Man. I told him that I'd spoken to Steve Ditko, Sol, and other people who were there at the time, including Stan, obviously, and that they all agreed that Steve's version was the one that was used, though Jack did his version first. I reported everything I'd seen and heard. We talked about the costume -- the bib and belt combo, the stripes down the arms, the mask, the symbols, a very Ditko-esque design. Jack was having some problems with his memory by then, but he thought about it for a minute, then said that maybe Steve should get the credit. He'd be okay with that. A little later, he was on stage and clearly had forgotten our conversation. He and Roz did, however, come to Marvel's 25th Anniversary Party that evening, which made me very happy. There's a story about that, too, but it will wait for another time."

Steve Ditko on who created Spider-Man (the link may not work properly, but happy Googling - it's out there somewhere, or you can always buy the book in the link)

Critics of Kirby's claim make two other points

  1. Why did Kirby not claim "I created Spider-Man" until he came into dispute with Marvel? Because it was not relevant. Most people were only interested in the characters he actually drew, and in any dispute they were the obvious place to start.
  2. Why did Kirby have trouble with Spider-Man's costume? So did Ditko, changing the web pattern from frame to frame. Kirby was a penciler, not an inker, so did not bother with some details. Also, he very seldom drew Spider-Man and when he did he tried to mimic Ditko's style. Kirby's own characters varied from frame to frame and issue to issue - just compare the robot in FF7, or compare the Watcher or Galactus in different frames and different issues.

In conclusion, Steve Ditko provided:

  1. Most of the costume, possibly influenced by the Halloween costume of the time.
  2. Everything after Amazing Spider-man issue 2: the characterisation and plots that we know and love.
    But that is a different topic: this page is about the narrow technical point of whether Kirby created the initial character.

Stan Lee provided

  1. The self-doubting dialog
Jack Kirby provided
  1. the name (his spider man predates the Halloween costume)
  2. the powers
  3. the set up
  4. the characterization
  5. the rest of the costume
  6. the first plots
  7. the first art

So on balance, yes, Kirby created Spider-Man as well. So Kirby was a reliable witness on key claims.

While on topic, who created Dr Strange?

While on the topic of who created what, many people have commented on how Dr Strange is very similar to a Dr Droom (D-R-oom) from Amazing Adventures issue 1, in 1961.


"Stan Lee has been quoted as saying Doctor Strange was kind of his second try at Doctor Droom." (source)

The story is credited to Stan Lee with pencils by Kirby and Ditko, so it was probably Kirby's rough outlines and Ditko added the details. The poses on page 1 for example are classic Kirby: indeed, the poses throughout. Whereas some of the detail looks very Disko-esque. That was normal for first issues: if Kirby didn't have time to draw the whole thing he would quickly rough it out for somebody else. According to the Marvel Method, which was in use in 1961, Kirby should have plotted it as well. We can see that he probably did from the art: it has been changed, indicating that the original art had a different story. Why would Stan Lee change his own story, and in such an odd way?

Evidence for changes
Look at that weird ending, where Dr Droom gets a Chinese face. That isn't a Kirby or Ditko face, somebody else has drawn it on (or possible Kirby or Ditko in a hurry). It's also a very weird ending: no decent story teller would have planned that. And look at the large amount of text crammed into the last pages: the artist did not expect that much text. But if we remove the weird face and the dialog the pictures tell a different story:

Droom without text

The old magician is on his death bed. The stranger hears something shocking. They embrace their hands, and some magical thing happens. Then the master is never seen again, but the stranger touches his face, and the servant treats him as the new master. Clearly the westerner has become the master. but that would mean he looked the same, and that might confuse readers. Plus he would be a very old hero, and Stan would not want that - kids can't relate to an ancient hero. So it looks like Stan got somebody to redraw the face. the face had to change - the art was clear - so Stan just had him turn Chinese instead, and wrote some extra dialog to explain it.

The flat face on page 1
Another point in favouir of being redrawn is the strange face of the hero at the start. It's flat, poorly drawn, so different from the three dimensional faces elsewhere. Kirby and Ditko drew better faces than that. And why all the crammed dialog saying that Droom was interested in Tibet? If we take away the dialog and the art tells a simpler story. The bald head, easy chair and pipe indicate that Droom was simply retired. The other doctors were too busy to go on a wild goose chase, but Droom was retired, so why not? And look closely at the hero's face throughout the story (if you can find the original): several shots suggest that he was either quite old or perhaps had a scar, or some sickness. And note the similarity with the Dr Doom origin! Age or a scar couild make him a misfit, and more willing to go to Tibet. Indeed, the story might not have been about a sick magiician, but about Droom trying to heal himself? 

The name Droom
The name "Droom" means "a fantastic but vain hope (from fantasies induced by the opium pipe)". ( Droom hoped to heal himself, but instead became the healer. However, Stan Lee likes his male heroes to be idealised (and preferably saving a helpless female), so a sick hero would trouble him. Of course, he later comprmoised and let Dr Strange have injured hands - essentially the same plot, but Steven Strange needed a handsome face! Who came up with that name? We do not have minites to the story conference, so cannot know for sure. but throughout his career, from start to end, Kirby was coming up with wild new ideas, indicating that he read widely. In contrast, Stan Lee's career up to 1961 consisted of copying whatever comics sold well from other publishers. When Stan Lee did not have Kirby around him he didn't create any memorable characters. So in the absence of other evidence an interesting name like Droom is more likely to be from Kirby than from Lee.

So who wrote the Droom story?
We cannot be sure of course because we don't have the original pencils or marginal notes. All we can say with reasonable confidence is that the story was changed. Why would Stan Lee change his own story, and to give it such a weird ending? It looks like the original ending had something he felt would not work (such as an imperfect hero, or two people with the same face, which could confuse readers). The point is that this is not the story that Stan would have written. So who wrote it? Kirby was an old pro, and almost certainly sketched the story out for Ditko, whereas Ditko was still relatively junior. So the plot was probably by Kirby, as was normal practice at the time, as we saw previously.

One last piece of evidence:
FInally, what about the name and costume? Two months before Ditko's Dr Strange premiered (in Strange Tales 110, July 1963), Jack Kirby drew a story in Tales of Suspense 41 (May 1963). Called? "The Stronghold of Dr Strange".
Dr StrangeDr Strange again
Recognise the costume? (Note: villains generally wore purple or green, heroes wore primary colors like blue)
Dr Strange by Ditko

So the origin story was probably by Kirby. The Costume was definitely by Kirby. The name Dr Strange? The Kirby Dr Strange story was written by "Stan Lee and Robert Bernstein". An unknown would not have plotted it, so the plot was proabbly agreed in a story conference between Kirby and Lee as normal, with Bernstein adding the dialog at the end. So who came up with the name, Kirby or Lee? As with the name Droom, Kirby has the better track record but we don't know for sure.

Dr Strange: summary
So Kirby probably created the story outline and the costume for Dr Strange, and there's a good chance he invented the name as well. Of course, Ditko's dsitinctive art and plots made Dr Strange a hit. But just as with every other major Marvel character, we find Jack Kirby seems to have had the idea.


Lee created Marvel Comics.
Kirby created Marvel comics.

In conclusion, Stan Lee was the genius who created most of Marvel Comics: the industry, the cross-overs, the billion dollars of brand value, the fact that you and I have even heard of these characters and can easily relate to them. That's all Stan. 

It is equally true that Jack Kirby was the genius who created most of Marvel comics with a small "c", the characters and stories.

Stan Lee, big "C". Jack Kirby, small "c". Simple.

The synopsis to FF 1

The written synopsis to issue 1 still exists. it's very brief, just 2 pages in the copy that is printed in FF358, and 4 pages in the copy printed here. This synopsis is sometimes used as proof that Stan Lee came up with all the ideas.


synopsis 2

The synopsis was written after the initial discussion

Stan Lee talked with Jack Kirby about the Fantastic Four before this summary was produced. According to Mark Evanier, Kirby's long time assistant:

"It [FF issue 1] feels an awful lot more like Jack’s earlier work than anything that Stan had done to that date. So I find it very difficult to believe that Jack did not have input into the creation of the characters prior to the — that synopsis, whenever it was composed. And, also, I have the fact that I talked to Stan many times, and he told me — and he said it in print in a few places — that he and Jack had sat down one day and figured out what the Fantastic Four would be."

Stan himself said in Origins of Marvel Comics,

"After kicking it around with Martin and Jack for a while, I decided to call our quaint quartet The Fantastic Four.  I wrote a detailed first synopsis for Jack to follow, and the rest is history." (emphasis added)

But years later, in 1991 when Marvel was in legal conflict with Kirby, Stan gave a different version of events:

"I didn't discuss it with jack first. I wrote it first, after telling Jack it was for him because I knew he was the best guy to draw it." (source: an interview with Roy Thomas in Alter Ego, the Comic Book Artist Collection)

Did Stan remember accurately? Probably not. His poor memory is notorious. It was always bad, as he admits himself.

"I even had a bad memory when I was young.  I'd call him "Bob Banner" instead of "Bruce Banner," etc.  I hadda give out a heap of no-prizes!" (source)

Steve Sherman, assistant to Jack Kirby, said:

"I asked Jack about that synopsis. He told me that it was written way after FF #1 was published. I believe him." (source)

Why would a synopsis be written after the event? That is normal in business. The boss discusses something with the workers, and it is written up as a series of instructions. Let's take a closer look.

A closer look

The above synopsis is a re-typed copy. See the XXXs: originally those had words underneath. Stan typed Xs to delete a word. But this version only has the Xs. Another version has no XXXs at all. So neither is the original. I have seen a third that claims to be the original, but none of them were public until the 1980s, over 20 years after FF1 appeared. Roy Thomas, (in his book "The Stan Lee Universe") mentions seeing the synopsis in "the late 1960s." It must have been 1968 or 1969, as Roy said the cover price had just gone up to 15c and he wondered if Stan was calling him to talk about another price rise. But Stan instead showed him this synopsis he had just found. Stan said he did not keep his other typed instructions, and it was pure luck that this one survived. In the book Roy also refers to one other early script (for issue 8). Like this first one it was not a script in the usual sense. 

"I remember seeing that synopsis (to FF 8) in Jerry Bails’s house when I came to Detroit to visit him. I said, 'This is a script?!?! You just give the artist some sort of synopsis and then the guy goes off and draws it and then he adds balloons? What a crazy way to do comics!' Now of course I think the fact that they’re not done that way anymore is one of the things that’s wrong with comics." - Roy Thomas

Apparently none of these early synopses survive, despite the hundred of comics written in the early 1960s, and the interest of fans such as Roy Thomas and Jerry Bails. Presumably "scripts" were very sparse, if they were written at all.

Much of the synopsis contradicts the final version. For example, about Sue being permanently invisible, Johnny not throwing fireballs, Reed feeling pain when he stretches, and the emphasis on the Ben-Reed-Sue love triangle.

Similarity to Challengers of the Unknown
Many have noted the similarity to Jack's earlier comic for DC, Challengers of the Unknown: a s similar origin, four friends who roughly represent the four elements, etc. The Challengers even got super powers in issue 5, including one like the Human Torch.

Three references to Mars
Fantastic Four 1 was planned for July 1961 (though cover dated November: that was normal at the time). This means it would be planned in April, the exact same month that the Russian Yuri Gagarin became the first man in space. But it was inspired by the success of Justice League, which first went on sale cover date March 1960. So they were thinking about superheroes before April, and from April the space race suddenly hots up. Note the changes between the published issues 1 and 2. Issue 1 is vague about merely going "to the stars" and actually gets no further than the atmosphere. But in issue 2 they refer specifically to Mars. Before April 12th, when the news broke, the fear was just that the Russians would get into space. After April 12th the concern was for the next step: to the Moon, and if the Russians got there quickly, then to Mars. This hints that FF 1 was plotted before April 12th, or certainly before the significance of the news had sunk in over the following weeks. FF 2 was of course written after the Russians "next step: the Moon" was well known. It may be important then that the synopsis mentions Mars three times. It suggests that the synopsis was written after FF was drawn and scripted, but not long enough after for "relax, the Russians are nowhere near the moon yet." This is consistent with the normal course of events: writing a synopsis of a meeting after the meeting.

The tone is verbose, even chatty. He gives reasons for creating ideas. Why give these in a script? Why not just say "make the guy flame on" - why the need to say "here is proof that the ideas are all mine, and this is my reasoning"? If he is just chatty then why not chat about the other parts of the story?

The smoking gun
The "synopsis" only covers the origin. The finished comic is in three roughly equal parts, and the synopsis acknowledges that, but dismisses the first part in a single line and does not outline the final part at all. Even if we go with the theory that this was the original script, with no input from Kirby, that means Kirby wrote two thirds of the book on his own, and the rest was greatly changed from Stan's idea.

Why was the synopsis written?

Stan Lee understood the business of comics. So he would know that this particular issue had legal implications, so he needed a paper trail.

He knew the comic might be noticed
At the exact same time the comic was being written and drawn, Yuri Gagarin became the first man in space. The news broke on April 12th 1961. This was HUGE news. The space race was already hot, but this made it WHITE hot. Stan's "first into space" comic was suddenly topical. This had legal implications, because Stan was planning to slip the book under the radar of his competitors.

He knew that National (DC) had reason to complain
Marvel was planning a superhero team, but DC distributed their books (they lost their own distributor in 1957 in the Frederick Wertham anti comics crusade). DC was happy to take their money because Marvel at the time didn't produce any superheroes that might compete for sales with Batman and Superman. Worse, FF 1 looks like Challengers: it might look like Marvel had taken Kirby, formerly a DC artist, and got him to copy his own DC title! The distributors would not be happy. The synopsis seems designed to be insurance against these claims: 

The synopsis looks designed to cover his back
The Synopsis would come in useful if either Martin Goodman changed his mind or DC found out and were not happy.

It was no big deal
This need not be a conscious decision. Stan just had a gut feeling that he should have a written copy. It's a common feeling in any business. Stan understood business, this would be an automatic response, the work of a few minutes. It does not require any conspiracy.

"We should discuss"
The synopsis says "we should discuss this" - does this imply it was before the meeting? It was before any lengthy meeting, certainly. But most of these elements (the love triangle, how easily they changed, etc) were vague in issue 1. They were not set in stone until later issues. Is it dishonest to say "do this" after it is already being done? No, these are minutes, a paper trail. It's a faithful record of what was said, from Stan's point of view. And a record of the same event from Jack's point of view would have had the same general ideas but in a different way.

Does "do this" and "do that" prove it was all Stan's idea? No, that's just good business. You have to make actions crystal clear. I sometimes make web pages for others, and the synopsis reminds me of the emails I get later: "you will do this, you will do that" - those emails reflect meetings where I actually made the suggestions, as I was the one with the expertise: the client was the one wanting "a web page," but then took my advice at every point about what was possible, what would work, etc. But he was the one signing the check, so the final document had to say "you will do X". I was the creator, but he was the master.

The famous synopsis was probably written a few hours (or at most a few weeks) after the initial discussion, but Kirby never read it.  The synopsis is minutes of a meeting, presented after Kirby gave his input. It only deals with those elements that might cause legal trouble later, and tries to show that DC has no reason to complain. In short, this is not a synopsis, it's a defense against DC. Years later it became useful in the legal battle against Kirby. Stan searched for it, and found it in 1969 when Kirby was grumbling about deserving more pay. it then became widely published in the 1980s when Kirby was talking about suing Marvel

The synopsis to issue 8

We know of just one other early synopsis: for issue 8. Roy Thomas refers to it in the book "Alter Ego, the Comic Book Artist Collection". Here are Roy's words and my comments.

"As I said earlier the synopsis for #1 wasn't the first FF plot I'd seen."

[ Roy was Stan's right hand man since 1965, yet this was worth him commenting on: apparently he only saw two written FF synopses in all his years there.]

"Over Thanksgiving weekend in 1963, while the nation mourned the assassination of President John F. Kennedy the week before, I took a train from St. Louis to Detroit to spend a subdued holiday with Jerry balls, college-prof founder of Alter Ego."

[Jerry Balls pretty much invented fandom as we know it: he kept writing letters to the comics asking for information. He was probably the first person to ever ask for a script.]

"There, he showed me an item Stan Lee had recently sent him: the 'script' for Fantastic Four #8."

[Why so old? In November 1963 Stan would have just finished FF 25 or 26. Why send such an old script? Was it the only one he had? Or the only one that was worth sending?]

"'Knowing' that comic book artists always worked from a script as detailed as a Hollywood screenplay, I was surprised to see that what Jerry had received was merely a plot, its first page covering the initial 13 pages of the comic, and that it was clearly meant as a blueprint from which the artist would break down the tale into pictures. 'Marvel artists work from this?' I asked. Jerry said apparently so: Stan added dialog and captions later. I shook my head. it seemed to me like a helluva way to run a railroad. (Yeah, as it turned out - a good one!) Evidently Stan trusted artists like Kirby, Ditko, et al, to both pace out and flesh out the story." 

[So this is never in question: the artists did most of the "writing" work.]

"Truth to tell, neither Jerry nor I can recall whether he ever possessed the entire synopsis, or merely the first of two pages - [because] he retyped and printed only page one. Jerry feels that, if he'd had the whole synopsis, he probably would have printed both pages.

[So the only two synopses we have only deal with the key 11 or 13 pages, and are highly compressed. This agrees with Kirby's memory that when a person suggested a comic to a potential client they only roughed out the first few pages.]

Now let's look at that synopsis in detail:


What did Jack add to the story?

It is fascinating to compare Stan's synopsis to Jack's finished art. Jack's version of the story is...

What did Stan add to the story?

We do not have audio of the original story conference so we cannot know how much Stan came up with.

We do have his dialog, but that generally just states what is already clear from the art. Stan is very good at making the story simple and obvious: this is clear in Kirby's later Fourth World books. They are wonderful to study, but without Stan's easy dialog they are too intense for most readers.

In my opinion, Stan was excellent at turning out comics quickly. His stories had familiar tropes (the hero always wins, the woman always needs rescuing). His stories were very easy to follow. But they were "just comics": a throw away, undemanding medium. Jack added the depth that made the comics something more.

In conclusion, Stan's stories and dialog were very easy to follow. Beyond that it is difficult to say what he added. However, his fame does not (or should not) rest on his stories, but in his abilities as an editor and promoter. Nobody else has ever done it like Stan did it. That is Stan's real genius.

Stan, the genius, the founder of the modern industry

The following is by lornelb of the FF forum, and reprinted by permission. Somebody asked why we see so much negativity about Stan Lee among fans.

"The reason you don't find any negative blogs about Kirby is that this whole "Lee vs Kirby" debate arises because of the perception that Lee has somehow cheated Kirby and made himself rich, while Kirby died penniless.

The whole narrative rises from that notion.

Stan is portrayed as the Hollywood Huckster, who had little to no input in the comics that made him rich, beyond "signing his name larger than everyone else's".

Jack is portrayed as the true genius who conceived, drew, and wrote everything with little to show for it at the end of his life. Under those circumstances, there wouldn't be much sense to an anti-Kirby blog.

Even Kirby's stories about coming into the Marvel offices as the furniture was being moved out and Stan crying at his desk, untrue though everyone else has stated them to be, doesn't generate much anti-Kirby sentiment, because he is, by far, the more sympathetic of the two.

Kirby can claim to have written everything and Stan, nothing, and be contradicted by the writers and artist working at Marvel at the time, and still not be vilified, because his creative genius is beyond question.

The way the industry was set up then, the work for hire credo insured that most creative types would have little more than their contracted pay rates to show for their work.

The problem for me is that vilifying Stan for the way the comics industry existed while the two worked together, is completely misguided.

Stan's vision and innovations (including non-innovations like copying EC's style of promoting it's artists) completely changed the comic book publishing industry forever. Without Stan's editorial vision and scripting, the Fantastic Four (nor ANY of the Marvel comic characters that he scripted, including Spider-man) doesn't create the sensation that they did amongst comic book readers.

In a world without Stan, the average comic book reader is an 8-14 year old boy who stops reading comic books when he discovers either girls or porn; the artists who fall into comics would still be largely working under pseudonyms (Check with Jacob Kurtzburg about that [Jack Kirby's real name]); working until their eyesight failed because a lack of medical or financial retirement benefits in an industry that probably wouldn't have lasted past the first huge hikes in paper and ink costs in the early 70s.

There certainly wouldn't be any websites like these, created by educated fans who retained their love of the medium and were confident enough in the attractiveness of the medium that there would exist like minded fans with whom they could communicate.

There are any number of far more talented creative types who have worked in comics than Stan Lee, including Seigel, Shuster, Kane, Kirby, Eisner, Moore and dozens of others. But not one of them can claim to have had as great and far reaching an effect on the medium overall as Stan Lee did. With his innovations to comic book scripting (I think far too little credit is given to Stan for his skill at writing dialog, which not only included biblical and Shakespearean elements, but included an great ear for being able to distinguish one speaker from another in the same panels) and his vision of a unified, continuous comic book universe, Stan Lee changed the entire industry.

It is also Stan's idea of a unified universe and continuity that created the modern notion of comic book collecting. With the use of the footnote (Something Stan used copiously to reference previous storylines and character appearances), constant references to previous adventures, continued storylines, and cross-overs, Stan created a necessity for readers to retain their prior issues for reference. This was never the case before, where comic book stories mostly, outside of the same characters appearing in the same outfits, were written as if each new story had no connection to any previous storylines. Stan's use of continuity also created the desire in newer readers to find those referenced issues so that they could see what was going on. In this way, Stan pretty much took comic book collecting out of the province of eccentrics and rich Arabian child princes and made it a common practice. From this arose stores dedicated to comic books and back issue mail order companies.

None of the forgoing can be attributed to Steve or Jack. They had been plying their skills in the same manner for some years before the so-called Marvel Age. It wasn't until Stan expanded the EC model of fan inclusion and artist recognition using his own breezy, accessible editorial voice (His detractors call this "hucksterism"), that comic book fandom took off. As a case in point, seven years after Stan and Jack first published FF#1, Jack's name was known to even the most casual of comic book readers. Could the same be said for Graham Engels, or Johnny Craig, two of EC's mainstays?

In the final analysis, Jack will always be seen as the person who was ill-served by the industry and the very Publishing House that he helped promote from a ill-regarded, lowest rate paying, shady publisher having, juvenile delinquent catering cesspool, into a billion dollar industry worthy of being owned by Disney.

But, because Stan managed to help change that perception and also appears to be prospering at the end of his life, doesn't mean that he is the villain of the piece, or even somehow responsible for Jack's circumstances.

Jack was bursting with ideas, but he was also impatient, bitter and distrustful (rightfully so). Jack also knew the nature of the industry he chose to work in. Had Jack been able to hold out against Goodman's "promises" long enough, I believe that, when the company was sold, jack would have found himself in a far better position with respect to the new management. Jack would have been seen as an "asset" to the company's continued goodwill, and probably treated as such. Unfortunately for Jack, by the time he returned to Marvel, he was too bitter, combative and distrustful to allow that to happen.

Meanwhile, everyone is seeing Stan move to California, glad-handing movie stars and living "the life".

Sympathy for Jack and jealousy for Stan leaves us with exactly what we have now; a bunch of people lined up to tell us what a dishonest snake Stan is for prospering while Jack languished.

So now we get a bunch of stories about how Stan took credit for everything while stealing office pencils, from everyone who managed to pass by Stan in the offices, because that's the narrative everyone wants to hear.

I imagine that, upon Stan's passing, some of the acrimony will die down.

Who created the FF? Originally?

Based on the above evidence we can speculate about how the Fantastic Four was created, Kirby's original intentions, and why the tone of the comic changed after the first year.

More links

These links were recommended by Richard Gagnon. The web being a dynamic thing I can't guarantee that all still work.

Mark Evanier's Jack FAQ (link may be dead, but it's a famous page so should be around somewhere: Evanier is the world authority on Kirby)

Larry Leiber on early Marvel work (short version: says nothing about Stan's method, but Larry Lieber always provided full scripts for Kirby)

Conclusion: what did Stan do?

To summarize, the Fantastic Four could not exist without Stan Lee. Stan organized and promoted and polished it, while Kirby provided most of the ideas and all the art. Lee then joined the comic titles together, promoted them, made Kirby's stories accessible to casual readers and made the whole business run. Kirby simply created the stories.

The Fantastic Four without Stan Lee would be like Kirby's Fourth World: hard for non fans to follow or connect to, and hence soon canceled. Except that Fourth World would never have been created if Stan had not put Kirby's name so prominently, so that DC would offer Kirby freedom to do whatever he wanted. Yes, maybe Stan should have split his writing fees with Kirby. But that process was unheard of. Either way, Stan's vanity was his great weakness. but it was also his great strength: his tireless self promotion built an industry from which all writers and artists benefit.

Stan was not "a creative person" in terms of art or original plots, but he was extraordinarily creative: he created (or re-created) an entire industry.

Every artist, every writer, has a better chance of earning a living, and sometimes a very good living, because of Stan. The heirs to Kirby are the modern artists who have jobs because of Stan. They have heard of Kirby because of Stan. Every artist and writer has a chance of being remembered forever, because of Stan. Millions of adults (rather then just kids) enjoy comics, because of Stan. And I am one of them.

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